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Mes remarques :

Quelques traductions manquantes, notamment
ewcommand{ heday}{1er mai 2021}
ewcommand{quality}{Proposition pour l'AssemblÃ©e GÃ©nÃ©rale du heday}
itle{RÃ¨glement intÃ©rieur de l'Association RÃ©zo Mezt-Rennes FÃ©dÃ©rÃ©s}
Le RÃ©zo
Pas d'espace avant les : en anglais, par exemple (peut-Ãªtre pas exhaustif) :
- The subscription fee is :
- Are exempt from paying the subscription fees :
- This includes :
- account sharing :
- can be contacted using :
- Leading Committee :
- Translator's note :

Ã€ Ã©claircir :

References will be made to the student residences, managed by the company HLM Les Foyers, Belle Fontaine located at [...] and Hertz, located at [...].

Peut-Ãªtre remplacer par :

  References will be made to the Belle Fontaine and Hertz student residences, managed by the company HLM Les Foyers, respectively located at [...] and [...].

Est-ce qu'on peut mentionner que le bureau peut autoriser un autre moyent de paiement s'ils veulent (genre Lydia) pour une transaction spÃ©cifique ?

The payment of the subscription fee is made by check, cash, bank transfer or credit card. Once acquired, the subscription fee can only be refunded by decision of the Leading Committee.

Est-ce que techniquement le bureau doit accepter chaque abonnement ?

Definitive membership is pronounced by the Leading Committee after full payment of the subscription fee.

Pour le dÃ©lais de cotisation gratuite pour les gens dÃ©favorisÃ©s, le dÃ©but du dÃ©lais est pas clair je trouve (aprÃ¨s tous les entretiens etc j'imagine) :
```
The Leading Committe shall decide on the request within 7 days.
```
Pas de majuscule Ã Members je pense
```
other Adherent Members
```

s/WiFi/Wi-Fi

WiFi network
by wire or WiFi
WiFi terminals
WiFi access

FedeRez members -> FedeRez association

is granted to all members of the FedeRez members

s/machines/interfaces ?

is limited to 10 machines registered simultaneously on their account

"to" suivi de "not to" c'est bizarre, on peut virer le "to" ?

In particular, the member undertakes to
not to download  [...]
not to penetrate [...]

Forme ing je pense :

In addition, subscribe to the RÃ©zo implies 
be aware of the services
not leave their machine unattended

Deviendrait :

In addition, subscribing to the RÃ©zo implies 
being aware of the services
not leaving their machine unattended

ProblÃ¨me dans les adresses mail :

bureau@RÃ©zo-rm.fr
ca@RÃ©zo-rm.fr
support@RÃ©zo-rm.fr

Le pronom non-genrÃ© prÃ©fÃ©rentiel Ã§a devrait Ãªtre "their", pas de "his", "her", ou "his/her"
```
his / her
```

Est-ce qu'il y a besoin de reprÃ©ciser que certaines donnÃ©es sont conservÃ©es dans la partie RGPD ?

Non-anonymised data of a member can only be kept with his explicit consent. On the other hand, deletions can be made by the RÃ©zo without notice or justification.

s/sSatutes/satutes

in accordance with the current sSatutes

Il y a quelques incohÃ©rences dans l'usage des majuscules dans les listes, notamment aprÃ¨s les ;

Mes remarques : * Quelques traductions manquantes, notamment ` ewcommand{ heday}{1er mai 2021}` ` ewcommand{quality}{Proposition pour l'AssemblÃ©e GÃ©nÃ©rale du heday}` ` itle{RÃ¨glement intÃ©rieur de l'Association RÃ©zo Mezt-Rennes FÃ©dÃ©rÃ©s}` `Le RÃ©zo` * Pas d'espace avant les : en anglais, par exemple (peut-Ãªtre pas exhaustif) : - `The subscription fee is :` - `Are exempt from paying the subscription fees :` - `This includes :` - `account sharing :` - `can be contacted using :` - `Leading Committee :` - `Translator's note :` * Ã€ Ã©claircir : ``` References will be made to the student residences, managed by the company HLM Les Foyers, Belle Fontaine located at [...] and Hertz, located at [...]. ``` Peut-Ãªtre remplacer par : ``` References will be made to the Belle Fontaine and Hertz student residences, managed by the company HLM Les Foyers, respectively located at [...] and [...]. ``` * Est-ce qu'on peut mentionner que le bureau peut autoriser un autre moyent de paiement s'ils veulent (genre Lydia) pour une transaction spÃ©cifique ? ``` The payment of the subscription fee is made by check, cash, bank transfer or credit card. Once acquired, the subscription fee can only be refunded by decision of the Leading Committee. ``` * Est-ce que techniquement le bureau doit accepter chaque abonnement ? ``` Definitive membership is pronounced by the Leading Committee after full payment of the subscription fee. ``` * Pour le dÃ©lais de cotisation gratuite pour les gens dÃ©favorisÃ©s, le dÃ©but du dÃ©lais est pas clair je trouve (aprÃ¨s tous les entretiens etc j'imagine) : ``` The Leading Committe shall decide on the request within 7 days. ``` * Pas de majuscule Ã Members je pense ``` other Adherent Members ``` * s/WiFi/Wi-Fi ``` WiFi network by wire or WiFi WiFi terminals WiFi access ``` * FedeRez members -> FedeRez association ``` is granted to all members of the FedeRez members ``` * s/machines/interfaces ? ``` is limited to 10 machines registered simultaneously on their account ``` * "to" suivi de "not to" c'est bizarre, on peut virer le "to" ? ``` In particular, the member undertakes to not to download [...] not to penetrate [...] ``` * Forme ing je pense : ``` In addition, subscribe to the RÃ©zo implies be aware of the services not leave their machine unattended ``` Deviendrait : ``` In addition, subscribing to the RÃ©zo implies being aware of the services not leaving their machine unattended ``` * ProblÃ¨me dans les adresses mail : ``` bureau@RÃ©zo-rm.fr ca@RÃ©zo-rm.fr support@RÃ©zo-rm.fr ``` * Le pronom non-genrÃ© prÃ©fÃ©rentiel Ã§a devrait Ãªtre "their", pas de "his", "her", ou "his/her" ``` his / her ``` * Est-ce qu'il y a besoin de reprÃ©ciser que certaines donnÃ©es sont conservÃ©es dans la partie RGPD ? ``` Non-anonymised data of a member can only be kept with his explicit consent. On the other hand, deletions can be made by the RÃ©zo without notice or justification. ``` * s/sSatutes/satutes ``` in accordance with the current sSatutes ``` * Il y a quelques incohÃ©rences dans l'usage des majuscules dans les listes, notamment aprÃ¨s les `;`

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